All Comments on 'Potter's Mark'

Glad to see this I noticed that time had passed since your last tale and was getting worried that something might have happened to you.

Some people don't know how to love, sometimes it is like a poison passed down from their parents, sometimes it is the result of illness, either way it hurts.

Not disappointed nor did I expect to be. Good ole Frank. Still providing for the girls financially. ;-)

time for all to cum to the aid of their "putter" TK U MLJ LV NV

Seemed a very dark story to me. No winners, really. Hard to imagine an abused woman putting up with Frank, especially with the support group she had. If they put up with Frank for over a decade, why would they have the death bed scene? There was the potential for drama in that scene, but Frank was too out of it. Would it have been better to make Frank less an ogre? Have them discover he left his insurance to the SPCA?

Anyway, always good to read one of your stories.

Chilley

Thank you. Nice to have you back and I hope feeling better.

Why not just let the man die. Good read thanks for sharing.

Was him agreeing to Father 2 Kids and getting pissed because of 1 and then to come Home and take his Anger out on his Wife. That Is COLD!!

Short, sharp, coup de grace,

They done him in and very effectively - he had it all possible he chose nothing of value for 12 years - he died knowing the truth and paying for his sins - if he had simply refused to participate in the poly but had been and otherwise good and faithful husband and father I would see him differently but he wasn't that either - suffer!.

It was fun and we all want you doing more when you can -

and this type of lifestyle will become somewhat necessary for some in the future I think. There seem to be fewer good loving men today and many more good women looking for them... Fewer and fewer old trolls to read this site every year.

Ron Wood OldMarineVet

Those sisters are mean and cold. If Nick screws up they will take him out like yesterday's garbage. Another good read from Scorpio44.

The way the four of them treated Frank, they are so morally disabled, so ethicly deprived, and so bereft of principles, they must all be very expensive lawyers!

Sorry, UNO ESTRELLA for this one.

ps. you are better then this one

vanderdecken

Very interest story, wonder if I'd ever be lucky enough to experience something like this. I'm sure most would!

Disgusting....utterly disgusting...

sorry this rated a 2 I can understand being upset with the man but to be little him on and in his death bed It is fucked up .

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