All Comments on 'Predator & Prey'

Neat work ...but i stilll think u r hotter than ur work

but i do neeeeed some help desperately

Oh my god. You have written my most frequent fantasy!! I loved the story. The dominant male and the reluctant female. The force, the passion Oh God I think i came when i read it! Write a sequel please!!

Just, wow.

Very, very powerful and well-written.

you should continue it, make a second chapter

oh mannn that was so good! i think you hsould make a second chapter please!! i want to know what happens between them two

Oh, lovely attention to detail and great character background/development. Are you sure there isn't a part two?

I loved this submission. Helena and Julian are two wonderfully descriptive characters. I read your profile and found that you are an aspiring author, is this and excerpt from one of your novels? I would love to see more of these two.

That was fierce! I am fucking someone named Julian and he bears striking resemblance to your Julian!

This is a really good story. Ugh, no chapter 2.....I just want to write another chapter, but I know it would be crap compared to your writing. I hope there might be more.......Please.

Whilst there was less violence then I've read in stories previously this was somehow darker & more shocking. Took me to a place I've never been before & forced me to enjoy it. 5 reluctant stars.

Some people deserve all they get.