by luckyman99
A great and believable start to a very erotic encounter. However, once outside, the activity went beyond my limits. I would have left it at the point of the fingering by the first man and then, with her worked up, sent the couple home to fuck each other's brains out.
Overall, a really good erotic short piece.
with parents like that it doessn't have much of a future to look forward to.
The writinf was okay - ish! But the development of it was poor.
Sorry excuse for an "erotic" story. Go back to the drawing board, author.
I found it very arousing... probably not for everyone, but I suspect there are plenty who will enjoy it immensely.
Risking her pregnancy fucking two strange men. What kind of asshole cold be turned on by this?