All Comments on 'Presence Ch. 01'

i love it, absolutely love. please write more soon.

What a fantastic story do far!!!!!!! I love the characters and storyline. You have a wonderful 'pen'....your writing is awesome! Will be looking for the next part! :)

ohh, this looks to be really good!!

oh please continue it's getting really interesting

You sure know how to get someone's attention! Can not wait to ready the next chapter. Hopefully it won't be too long in coming.

Nice beginning, sure hope Ash doesn't end up in prison.

Amazingggg..Plz dont make us wait to long for the next chapter

OMG. PLEASE MORE. I loved it, i cant wait till the next chapters.!

Oh I'm glad to see a new story from you. You're one of my favourite writers here. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Glad you're back! Can't wait to read more...

Gosh, that part was a scary one and violent. I hope the criminal would not torture Ash.

next please

Next chapter please!

Omg I love this u must post a new one soon I'm diying to know what happens

Great start! Looking forward to reading more!

I don't know how this slipped though the crack...but I am glad I found you...Keep it up.

Ooh! This is exciting. And, dangerous. I'm going to Chapter 2 now.

you have intrigued me....

Applesauce is more interesting