All Comments on 'Presence Ch. 03'

I liked the story. What a way to end it. I wonder what will happen with Ryan?

that's all I can say...just wow.

that was quite amazing!! how wonderful is kenji?? cant wait to read more from you!

Lovely sweet story with an exceptional twist. Can't wait to see what happens with Ryan.

Lovely ending, but does beg the question is Ryan in danger?

This is one of the best stories! I would like to know what is going to happen to the young blond man that Ryan followed? Is there going to be the follow up story? That will be lovely! Thank you DreamerOne!

To those of you wondering about the ending, I will write a follow-up to this story after I've written my next story. And what's going to happen with Ryan... well, you'll just have to wait and see...

There are no words for how amazing this story is you are brilliant the twist is truly inspired. Hats off to a great writer.

Lmao for that person that said if Ryan is in danger lmao how could he be in danger if he is dead how could he be in danger by the wAy loved the story it would have been even greater if that guy from the club he danced with appeared more and what ever happened to him

I get the feeling that the blonde guy at the ending of this story was the same guy from the club, really the only blonde guy that appears throughout the story. Did anyone else catch this, or was it just me? Am wondering if that was who Ryan attached himself to... if so it would be a poetic justice sort of thing.... just a thought.

~EnchantedGreen~

Tell the story of the blond boy and make it connect with Kenji, Ash, and Pinky. A story that got a new beginning

I love this story.. Hot, sweet, and mystery all in one

thats the best bloody thing ive read for ages.well done...jonathan east lancashire.....

The blond guy cheating on his girlfriend was a man, not a boy.

kind of weird and slightly adorable epilogue. actual ending of story dead cute. a lovely three parter. perfect

many stars

O-o wooooow you're good.

An incredibly lovely way to end a perfect story.

But what about the poor blond "boy"!? You must erradicate that Ryan creature, whatever it is. He cast a pall over this lovely romance even though it stilled blossomed to fruition. Now he's creeping into the life of another poor soul who

has done nothing to invite him.

it could av been great if Ryan had crossed over instead of disturbing another person. Apart from that, i loved the story. Thank u.

That was incredible! Scary, exciting, passionate and riveting. Incredible!! Omg poor Ash! I got away from an abusive relationship and am still having trouble trusting and moving on, but I need to be brave. Thank you so much for sharing your talent with us.

I would love to read about Ryan's new victim and how Ash and Kenji are doing.

This story was awesome...

Going to cry and make miso soup

So. Damn. Creepy. I’m officially all about this horror / adorable romance mashup! Very unique.

Your writting is amazing!

don't normally read and like spooky stuff but this story was awesome.

This was such a unique storyline and executed perfectly! I really enjoyed reading this 5 stars!