All Comments on 'Press Start to Play'

Only one problem, per se', with this story. They're called pantyhose / tights, not stockings. At least they were a part of the story, thanks for that! Keep writing and we'll certainly keep reading.

Not bad and enjoyable. I feel that it was short. Granted she was just getting the guy off, it just seem out of place. I feel maybe there should of been more to it, but maybe you're planning on a small series or maybe your not. None to less, good story Blackjack.

but it could use more description of the surroundings, just seems like once the thing gets going there is no one else around and they just hump away in the middle of a crowded spot and no one seems to notice

Please for the love of god make part 2 of This and the Victoria Justice one please