All Comments on 'Pretty Baby Ch. 01'

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I love this story!! Amazing characters having so much fun! Thank you!

This is your best work. Well written, and a very, very hot and believable story.

So how much of this was wishful thinking? ;)

*purrs* Very nice story. I could picture the little slut, taking her time with all that cream and enjoying every last drop. It's fun to savor the good stuff. ;)

Amazing progession. I've only read chapter 1 but she certainly does march along. This is very well written in addition to being hot. You don't see a lot of pure stroke written so well.

This gal is my dream girl!!!! where do I find one like her???? lol pretty well written too!! keep it up!(so to speak)

Great writing, good character development and HOT!

This is a tremendous beginning to what I know is a truly great story. Your readers have alot to look forward to when the next chapters are posted!! Well done.

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I don't understand why the catholics fight so hard to keep young girls from sex. when they discover it they become real sluts.