All Comments on 'Pretty Baby Ch. 02'

It's a wonderful piece of writing - but you already know that!! Excellent as always.

Well my patience was certainly rewarded with your second chapter chronicling the adventures of Alyssa. I really feel as if I know your heroine and as I've said before (a few times), I can't wait to read more.

The auction and de-flowering of Alyssa reminded me of the excellent "Memoirs of a Geisha" by Arthur Golden, but I have to say I think your writing was far more detailed and descriptive than his depiction of the scene. I'm impressed!

Janie xx

I am looking forward for her first 'date.' ;->

Also her first Time being dominated, and her first girl/girl session. A gang rape by the rich might be fun too, with at least 12 old men.USA

You should know what your stories do to women like me. I sit and imagine myself as Alyssa, feeling desired by so many and being the slut of the story. Another perfectly delicious chapter to what I am positive is an excellent series. I know eventually this story reaches a conclusion, and I almost dread it, because that means it is over, but damn, baby. . .I am sooo going to enjoy the ride getting there. ~ Red

I have been a fan of this site for years, and regularly partake... This story is the best I have ever read, and I am only on Ch 2!

When I am reading, I AM Alyssa...

In chapter 01, you might fantasize being with Alyssa. Somewhat of a stretch. But now that she belongs to Mr. Uber-rich Super-stud, and is going to be doled/dolled out to the super rich, she is pretty much beyond the imagining for normal guys.

Now it's just reading about what others in la-la land do.

Still intriguing, but not something you can relate to so much.

Paul in Oklahoma