All Comments on 'Pretty Baby Ch. 04'

Um...words fail me...

You really should see about getting this published. Flawless writing, an excellent storyline and characters that just jump off my laptop screen.

I can't wait to read more!

janiexx

I agree with janiexx in UK. I can envision this story as a quality "porn" movie. If the scenes could be done as you have described them with the dialogue left as is, it would be a big hit. Young Lady Chatterley is my favorite "soft porn" movie. Your movie would be much better.

Thanks for sharing your great talent.

Jerry

And she's just as liable to get HIV and all the other nasties from oral sex as she is from from riding bareback. But putting these thoughts aside, this is really well written. Nice one!

I am constantly in awe over your talent. I am so enjoying this series. A little bit every few days and yet. . .I know I'm going to read the next chapter tonight after posting this comment. This is a hot story! ~ Red