All Comments on 'Primal Frontiers Ch. 01'

... And hope for more

Very much wanting more - love the start and premise - going all the right way !!!!

MORE PLEASE

Your story shows great promise, but so far, it's only promise; it left me totally unsatisfied. Reading your first page caused me to think there would be at least three more--your set-up for the plot had great detail, but was soooo sloooow, when you cut it off at two pages, it made me want to say,"WTF happened?"

I know it's your story, but I think you should have had more sexual interplay the first morning. Anyway, It's your story, and I gave you ***. I truly expect to give you a well deserved ***** when you finish it.

What momma is inhaling is the scent of her own 20 year old boy Brian's semen. She imagines where that semen came from. "She turned her head to one side and pictured Brian's huge, naked cock sticking up in front of her face. The pulsing veins, the smooth skin over rigid flesh, the hefty balls begging to be properly released of their hot seed." Real soon she sees exactly how her boy's semen got into his boxers and she knows he's got plenty more where that came from. Mom is stunned: "She could plainly see Brian's prominent morning erection in his boxer briefs. It wasn't so much that he had an erection, but rather how incredibly large it was that surprised her. How am I not supposed to look at that, she wondered. It was so long and thick and she could plainly see the outline of the swollen head at the tip." Karen's cunt runs like a river, and Brian sniffs the air and inhales a strong musky aroma deep into his young lungs. It's the best thing a son can ever scent--it's his own mother's cunt-smell. Brian loves the smell of his mother's warm wet cunt, mom loves the smell of her boy's creamy semen--this couple were fucking made for each other.

This is a great build up for potentially a very good story.

Part 2 cumming shortly, right?

I am SICK of finding a good story and finding that perverse freak retelling the fucking story in a creepy way, come on man, we like this category but for christ sake go preach about incest elsewhere, we don't want to hear about "mommy-holes" and shit, your comments aren't romantic they are Disgusting

Thank you all for the feedback, it is much appreciated. And rest assured that this is only the first of several chapters in the story of Karen and Brian. I am already working on chapter two where things definitely begin to... heat up.

Thanks for taking the time to write this! Well written so far. Hopefully there will be a few voyeuristic moments leading up the the "main event". Catching her in her panties, a nip slip, accidental touching, etc!

Great job so far!

Enjoy this story. The character development is in-depth and has breath. The characters and plot are believable. The chemistry and romantic emotional attachment between mother and son reflects the beginning of a truly loving incestuous long lasting relationship built on respect, adoration and sexual compatibility. Rated chapter 1 5 stars.