All Comments on 'Primal Nights'

I love how you wrote this story. The words you used were carefully picked and only added to the richness. Thank you for not cheapening her total surrender or the experience shared between the two characters. This was quite fulfilling to read. Keep it up!

Your words kept me compelled to keep reading, feeling as if i was there. I could almost smell the salty air! By the end I was tingling from the emotions it stirred within. You definitely need to keep writing! I cant wait to see your next piece! ~~BlueRain

Wow! Lusty dominance and submission.....love the natural setting for their primal encounter!