All Comments on 'Princess Perched in her Electric Chair Ch. 02'
by Stardog Champion
- 17 Comments
Anonymousover 12 years agoI know this is fiction, but have you ever had root canal? it doesn't take a year or did she deliberately have more teeth done to continue the affair?
Anonymousover 12 years agoEpilogue? Be nice to see if lisa ever got her "filling" finished.
chilleywilleyover 11 years agoWhat a wonderful plot line. I loved it! Drama, action, humiliation, revenge. You've written one of the best stories on the site.
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoThe scenes are hysterically funny and drawn out perfectly - excellent tale!
Anonymousalmost 10 years agoThis had possibilities but your lack of an ending ruined it.
Anonymousover 8 years agoIt just never escaped to see daylight. In an attempt to be clever, your story got lost in the words and you forgot to tell it. Simply no fun to read because it was practically unreadable. What a mess!
RanDog025over 2 years agoAuthor needs to take a sabbatical from writing and take some literary classes. What's with the dot dot dot's? You read a few Literotica stories and that's what they did and it seemed real cool, so now you write dot dot dot stories too?
Anonymous11 months agoCreative telling of an all-to-often told tale. And an inventive response from the two injured parties.
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