All Comments on 'Prison Dreamcaster'

very soulful and honest....just like your poetry. I look forward to reading more of both.

For some reason, the formatting for the line breaks in the two poems contained in this story, did not take. I will submit a corrected version.

Sorry if it made the read difficult.

Your story really touched me. I could feel his pain and the love he had for her. You are truly a gifted writer. I loved how you incorporated poetry into the story. Thank you for writing a wonderful piece. I look forward to reading your other works.

Haven't given a "5" so easily in a LONG time. This story makes all of us at Lit. look like bumbling fools. You are quite the master storyteller, and this submission held my attention from beginning to end. Absolutely satisfactory in every way!

I don't normally read romance but the title got my eye and I gave it a shot. I'm glad I did.

i love that this has so much detail and story. it is a wonderful story and i am impressed

Good story. Just to make one thing certain. He did get out of his cell right and ended up where his love was right? Act of god or magic?

Cause at first I was thinking it was that he had killed himself and he was dreaming everything. Just don't want to draw the long conclusion here. Then again it could simply be becauses its really late at night and maybe I shouldn't be writing this in this at this hour.

While he did try to take his own life, he ultimately escaped his cell due to the power of love, god AND magic... (at least, I hope so!).

"I let the scented paper drift to the floor and began to slowly rock. Each pendulum swing of my body marked the silent, tortured passage of another lost moment."

powerful tale, leading to earn it's name 'Prison Dreamcaster' with a twist like a drop of lime on the tip of the tongue on the last line...savoring the tale~

witifully wonderful~

I don't often read the stories; looks like the makings of some good poetry in there (nudge)

This was good.

Such rich language. All the emotions fully realised.

A very fine piece of work.

Well done!

Extraordinary.

Five.