All Comments on 'Private on Parade'

This story is really good. So many people writing now suck, but this one is great. Please continue this story line and keep it to just these two,I think any thing else would be a shame.

Good fantasy and in the main very well written. Good to continue i hope. Makes me wanna join up to the Army!!!

The only part I didn't like is all the "whore" talk, but I know that's a big turn on for some. Plus, it's clear that this squaddie is enamored of his superior officer, and that the intent is not to humiliate her, but to heighten both of their pleasure -- so I just looked beyond that part. Other than that, it was a wild sex romp in the office and fun to read.