All Comments on 'Private Sex Show Goes Too Far'

I've read most of your stories today and they are all great. For short stories, character development is superb and your story lines are believable and erotic. Best author I have read so far.

sad piece of shit wimp husband and slut wife; nothing new here

Outstanding. Very well written and believable scenario

... what happens after the bloom leaves the rose? Where do your budding 'E & V' couple go from here. Who knows, maybe they'll live happily ever after. Yea, that’s the ticket. Don't hold your breath though.

it is a repeat but better written

I don't understand why so many readers complain that so many writers fantasize of watching their wives being fucked by especially well endowed men. The authors of these stories are not necessarily about their sexual preferences to start with. And second if this type of story turns you off then simply don't read it. You are given sufficient forewarning what to expect and there are no rules preventing you passing it by. Have some consideration for the author who has spent some considerable time in an attempt to entertain at no cost,

We need to know what happens next.

Kim will join with the shows that Nicky and Kevin put on, what will happen at the end of each show the girls will be offering a fuck at $100 a time and probably if it is an all male audience They will Have a queue And the cuckolds will not get any as their wives will be worn out.

The comment about not cheating because the husband gave permission but it is still adultery irrespective of the cuckolds permission.

After probably doing three shows a week Their vaginas will be well and surely stretched and sore they will not accommodate their hubbies until maybe the day before the first show of the next week but Kevin will perhaps opt out as he part of the show.

Cuckold faggot crap. I wanted a btb.

When are these impotent idiots stop flocking to literotica. Miserable loser.

Just the right amount of build up an a decent ending. Four stars

Good story, very realistic, could happen any weekend, any part of the country and someone like me would probably join in

This story looks real and always happened on every weekend. I like the details in it's writing which make me horny. I read it many times.

More of the lousy cuck and whore shit that infects LW still.

be careful what you wish for ......

it might just happen........

and then what'll you do ???

Swill...listen close, you can hear the hogs getting near...

I thought it was great, and at least somewhat believable.

We are active swingers, so the couples would have been involved.

This story must have been written on a farm. When you read I’m sure you’ll hear the same thing I am: Cuck, cuck, cuck a doodle do. Just another slut and cuck tale to remind real men just how awful and pathetic these folks really are. Sad sad sad

It’s only fiction, but I have no idea why anyone would want to watch their partner have sex with someone else.