All Comments on 'Problem Solved'

who the hell is Bob?

And where the hell did Tom go?

tom and bob sound like some kind of dick that said whatever it took to get into the 3way with the mom and daughter then used sharons inexpierence along with the mothers concern to do it.

Tom or Bob? You need to proof read your stories before posting them. as for the story it self it was so so.

Bob is short for Tom, obviously!!! I always call guys named Tom, Bob. Either that, or Bob ate Tom when he went to the bathroom!

... that she is pregnant just a week (second paragraph) after having unprotected sex?

And that's just one of the absurdities!

This should be re-named into "How To Turn Your Innocent Daughter into a Faggot-Assed Lesbian!" You both should have been aborted...

This isn't your first time so you probably know many of the things others have pointed out. I have read a good many stories and while I can't say I care for the mother/daughter action, (yes, I'm a throwback to the age where men were men and women were women, and if they weren't they didn't talk about it) I can still recognize a good story when I see one. THIS IS A GOOD STORY! The writing skills need a lot of work, but that's something you can fix. Start by printing out your story, then read it aloud. Those two things alone would have caught most of your problems. I always write out a list of characters and a general description of how they look and their goals. That book stays on beside my computer for instant reference. Good Luck!!

I found it very enjoyable read in spite of some of the mistakes, it was hot and the story flowed along without being rushed to the sex act it's self.

Kinda iffy on the mother daughter thing but can see where it was needed to gain her trust and get her turned on.

When did Tom become Bob?

was the point at which she should have called 911 and run as fast as possible to get away from Tom or Bob and dear old mom.

And who the fuck's Bob, and why does an 18 year old girl need a guy who was presumably so crap in the clinches that his wife fucked off with another man to show her how to have sex? Creepy, much? 1 star

to offset the asshole of LIT's 1 vote.

Anytime someone votes 1 star on a story, bonnietaylor2 (or his/her alter ego, vastiesmith2 or Vac2), will jump in, bad-mouth them, and auto-vote you 5, so here's another one star for your pointless, idiotic story, just so Vastiesmith2 or Vac2 can come along and award you another 5 stars for this garbage and have a foul-mouthed rant. Enjoy it while it lasts, you just got the worst troll on the site to cuddle up to you - there are people on here who are sick of his antics and will auto-vote you one star just because Bonnie/vastie/Vac2 gave you a thumbs up, so beware

HUGE turn off story of scum of the earth people, especially her slut mom.