by litpervgrrl
I'm so bummed out! This one is my favorite of all my pieces, and nobody has commented on it... is it because it is in the fetish section?
sigh...
Well written, kinky and fun! Could a fetish story be better than that? Thankl you for having fun with the story and leaving the door open for another adventure!
You go girl!
Okay, part of me liked the story (guess which part)...but it wasn't really something I could get off from reading. I've read some of your other stuff and really, really liked it so perhaps you could maybe develop these characters more?
kink... yummy! Fetish or not, she ironed out her kinks and loosened herself up! xxx
...and I'm really glad the narrator finally met someone.
Great storytelling, you can't even tell if it's just a story or true - not that it really matters.
Sequel, Please?
I totally got off on this story. Laura sounds scrumptious, so sweet and sexy. I'd sink down between her legs any day. Hope there's a sequel.
xxx.Sadie
Very, very hott. Sexuality isn't just about a cock in a woman's pussy. This story makes that point quite nicely.
Not many people write as well as you do, girl. This story is beautifully constructed and written beautifully. I identified with the protagonist (though I have no such hangups) and hoped against hope that she would eventually find the solution to her problem. And, though you left us with a little doubt, I think she has found it, and I hope she lives happily ever after with an expanding sex life.
Thanks for a wonderful story. Please keep writing.
Loved the story was very erotic turned me on a lot.
I think you need to keep writing but you should do a series instead of isolated stories.
I liked that you had several different elements to the story and him getting fucked in the ass with the same dildo as her was a great ending.
This should have a sequel (pretty please)