All Comments on 'Project Puppetmaster'

Good story. Well written.

Loved the story, waiting for the next part.

make moar plz

Loved it.. Would like to have seen him join in more actively.

enjoyed the story, but it would be a shame to end it now. so many ways to proceed with more adventures.

you should continue this into a series. haha. i enjoyed reading the story. keep it up.

More more more

I look forward to more of the story!

i like the hypnosis idea. i really wanted him to fuck them or them to be naked. cant wait till next part comes out

that's a story

More please. Great story!

Wow its very interesting and exciting, keep it up.

Puppet master was an awsome story. Please write more. I would love to find out what happens next. Does Barry fuck his mother and sister, or what?

Wow.. I can really see this turning into a great and hot series... keep it going please....

That was a great story, written incredibly, and a potential awesome series. Keep it up.

Woah! That was by far the best mind-control stories I've read! Kinda shaky on the transition from talking about sex to having it, but mindblowing climax! Keep up the good work! YOUR FANS DEMAND MORE!

please write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!i will be eagerly awaiting the next installments!!!

With or without the sex this is a very interesting idea . I will be very interested to see where it goes . Keep up the good work .

Ths is a very good begining. The possible areas to explore are unlimited. Please expand on this plot line as I am looking forward to see where you will take it.