All Comments on 'Pun-ishment'

Another really great one. It's creatively sexy, has erotic and unique imagery, and manages to be funny and a little bit cute and heartwarming, too, in the portrayal of this D/s relationship. A+

A very well written story but I found the excessive use of conversation being a distraction for me. At least for me, I would have preferred reading a better balance of conversation, narration, and description of the characters interacting.