All Comments on 'Punished for Teasing'

One can only hope Jack finds out, cripples Sammy for life, and tortures the slut before dropping her at a Mexican whoehouse.

Honestly, story was fine, could have been great, but Jack or Jake?! Make your mind up.

I know this sounds super crazy but I Wish this would happen to me ut in a forest tied to a tree and without me stratung to like it!

sadly i cant 'Wish upon a star" even I know thats a fairytale

A good story using a a straightforward plot. Dialogue was little forced here and there. Generally speaking men don't express themselves as well as women verbally, so in stories like this they would perhaps be less talkative- which of course would be more threatening. Other than that small quibble, a good solid story - I liked the short fantasy sequence in the shower. Also a good choice of title for a non-consent piece.