All Comments on 'Pursuit'

that was cruel!

I thought it was great!!! more please!

You are an ASS!!

Hot, nasty and consistent in his behaviour and seduction. Gave me the chills it was so well written, and the concept with the rules was brilliant. The last rule was an especially evil touch - though it left me wondering whether he lived up to it in this case. Shame you never submitted any more stories.

the hunted needs revenge, and the best kind: make the victorious hunter beg, plead, and make himself sick wanting what he so carelessly used. make him miserable and confused because he senses real feelings for the humiliated man. you can decide if he gets forgiven in the end. would LOVE to see that.