by svenjolly
for the dumb beauty and the even dumber ex-jock. that together = sportfucking with a sensual note of romance and drama as the poor girl could not go to college but makes sure her little sister will. whoooooooooo
and everybody will like it, it's saturday night fever combined with dirty dancing for dummies :-)
how sexy and erotic
if they have kids together, rocks will fall out of her or maybe if they are lucky one will be a vegetable.
but hey everybody is like them all there reactions are so natural, we all do those kind of decisions all the time and have no problem with it. it's so average. bonobos that's the name of our species, or is it?
This story is great so far! I figured you were going to end it with Rick and daisy breaking up, but you put a nice twist to it. I also love threesome stories so I cant wait for the next installment!
I think you took this in an awesome direction, keep up the good work. Can't wait for another chapter!
Very solid writing, not mind blowing but very good - 95th percentile kinda good. Strong dialogue, believable and you've developed the male character into someone real with feelings and an obvious care for Daisy. And she is believable as well. Just a girl (like me) whose a genuine slut but is carful about who knows it and would prefer if she could find all she needs in one man - which today is the new definition of monogamy.
Im going to read all of your writing.
asiantoy