by svenjolly
She's upset he's doing porn movies? Seriously? Or did I misunderstand the last bit, because it seems like a weird turn for her.
I know you have to add some tension, but please take it easy. These two characters are fun, it has been a fun read and I would hate to see the relationship "tank". Although it does seem that he really was living a "double standard" when he responded to Paul positively....bad decision which should perhaps bring a bit of problems....but ......
You write some really hot sex scenes and I'm hoping the next will be Hot Make Up Sex. To have this relationship fall apart, I think would be a real disservice to your readers.
Keep it up, wonderful series, looking forward to more soon. And a happy ending!
I almost never read long series on Literotica because the writing is usually flat, or worse, but I've had no problems sticking with Pushover. It's really well written and the characters are fully formed and as believable as such sexy creatures can be. However I felt I needed to commend this installment especially because you made some really fun choices with structure and the way you set up the fight between Daisy and Rick was beautifully played. You inspire me to do better when I write my own smut.