All Comments on 'Pushover Ch. 04'

by svenjolly

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Confused by end

She's upset he's doing porn movies? Seriously? Or did I misunderstand the last bit, because it seems like a weird turn for her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
don't ruin it

really enjoyed this series so far make it a happy ending

m48gunnerm48gunnerover 13 years ago
Take it easy

I know you have to add some tension, but please take it easy. These two characters are fun, it has been a fun read and I would hate to see the relationship "tank". Although it does seem that he really was living a "double standard" when he responded to Paul positively....bad decision which should perhaps bring a bit of problems....but ......

MizTMizTover 13 years ago
Make Up

You write some really hot sex scenes and I'm hoping the next will be Hot Make Up Sex. To have this relationship fall apart, I think would be a real disservice to your readers.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Great stuff!

Keep it up, wonderful series, looking forward to more soon. And a happy ending!

vrakkvrakkover 13 years ago
Great Stuff!

I'm really liking the story - keep it going.

fastandsloppyfastandsloppyalmost 11 years ago
Best episode so far

I almost never read long series on Literotica because the writing is usually flat, or worse, but I've had no problems sticking with Pushover. It's really well written and the characters are fully formed and as believable as such sexy creatures can be. However I felt I needed to commend this installment especially because you made some really fun choices with structure and the way you set up the fight between Daisy and Rick was beautifully played. You inspire me to do better when I write my own smut.

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