All Comments on 'Put Me In, Coach!'

When you two team up it just gets better. A un story and they brought plenty o "heat"!

This is like the sugary cream waiters spray over dessert. The initial taste is attractive but then you realize there is no substance. You pair can write real good stuff, but this falls short of that and even smacks of self-complacency. Sorry.

I don't see where it really fit in with the Nude Day contest. Very well written and enjoyable story, regardless.

I have to say, I'm probably biased because I'm a baseball fan. But this was a well written story, with plenty of amusing antics to go along with a playful sex theme. Also, I could honestly see something like this working in real life. Two things I'd like to point out... the sex scenes could have been longer(although quality over quantity, of course), and the full time job that Jake has seemed to be forgotten about after its initial mention... it didn't seem to factor much into the rest of the story. Aside from that, I loved your style of prose, and your characters were entertaining, and developed enough for their purposes. Don't forget for later, longer stories mean more developed characters. Well done!

Wow! What a wonderful, entertaining story! I'm saving this one to my favs so I can read it again...and again...and again. Yummmmm.

Nicely written, but a very slow start and then a very predictable middle and end cuts the rating down....

9f8eA breath of fresh and predictable air is quite satisfactory given the trash that surrounds it tonight especially when 2 folks who can write team up.<P>

This was a great tum for the acidic mind after all the garbage of sick wannabies came out of their latrines tonight.<P>

Well enough about them - you guys just need a little applause and ripening so more imaginative stuff wanders forth. This was very good but we know you will get better in time.<P>

Thanks Authors - you are appreciated<P>

With High Regard

Yes, yes. It's been done again. A story worth twenty regular stories springs from the minds of two excellent writers. Playful, imaginative, wonderful. Light and deft. And funny. When you two write together you weave erotica of the highest quality and I thank you for it. A hundred times thank you, for helping us separate the wheat from the chaff. Well done.

You know, the part where this story ties in with Nude Day? I mean besides the sex on the pitcher's mound, which wasn't really much, it was at night and no one was around, I fail to see where this qualifies as an entry for the Nude Day contest. An okay read otherwise.

...to have your story depend on a fourteen year old like that? You guys rock! Well thought out, well written. Good luck!

Fun read. :)

Enjoyable even for people who aren't into baseball (maybe you'd consider a cricket version for the UK market ;-) ).

Anyway, good story, fun to read. Good luck in the contest!

For an old story, it was the best.! Need I say more.? JAG/TSO

This story was so great and funny. I loved it.

Excellent story!

Brian's mother's name made me laugh - Candy Nutter! I don't know why but it cracked me up! Also the Bush kid. Lol

Loved this one xD

and he got hers. That's what it's all about.

Liked her, her dialogue...