All Comments on 'Quads Ch. 01'

Added mom and dad to it in a hot interesting way

A fun read that demands more! What went on with the others? was he as gentle as his bro was hard? was it a "one of" or a "first time"? Do mom and dad fin out? Give us more

How many times do they do it before the girls get pregnant?

I think you have a great story going here. I definitely see alot of potetional. Don't stop I need more!!!

wild great writing but {{more please}}

That was HOT. Iwould like to read more!!!

Great Add mom and Dad next time..

Just keep it clean. Do not use any slave, master in it, and no gay or lesben to the great story you

have going now. Entering Mom and Dad might be ok if done in an interesting way.

Nice switch at the end. Are the girls pergnant or do they want to be pregnant by the brothers? What about mom?? Dad??

Well, Mom & Dad dropped some pretty heavy hints, and then were away so conveniently.

This line of dialogue made me laugh. The rest of the dialogue is just as unbelievable. You need to hack off the whole backstory involving the parents. It doesn't advance the plot. The long spelling of words isn't necessary either.

flash

This was simply one of the best stories i have read on literotica so far, and that is saying alot since i love to read. I would love for you to bring mom and dad into it, but you would have to put some thought into it, you cant just make it something generic, it has to be original.

i liked the way the kids bonded with each other. i also liked the way the girls kept it a secret till the right time very romantic and don,t add the parents it will take away the bond between the four of them. save the pregnant part when the four bring a spouse into the ralationship

that left me a hurting raging hard on...im sure the other parts are just the same if not better...do not stop writing the quads series

this was one hot story I love reading storys like this one and twins good story you wrote

Don't stop writing the Quads. They are AWESOME!

Fantastic!!!

Yep, I'll definitely read the rest of your quad stories. I am very fond of twin stories and of course you have gone one better. One little thing: it is not possible to enter a girl's vagina "a few inches" then feel the resistance of the hymen. The hymen is located right at the mouth of the vagina; the resistance would be felt as you are trying to enter. Amazing how many stories miss that important point of anatomy. I STILL liked it.

JRM

... but who gives a shit? I know I don't. The idea of quads fuckinmg is interesting & the switch you pulled at the end of the story was excellent. Now, go 'way because I have a lot more reading to do.

Totaly Rocks Dont Stop Posting These Great Stories

The thing i like about this is that you really portray the unbounding love siblings have for one another. You also take time to characterize the Quads, which is refreshing. was lmao at the end. Very nice way to end it. This was excellent!

Who would have thought that the girls would think about switching brothers? given the fact that they were Quads, the sex was no surprise. What a great story. Can't wait to read the other chapters. July 25,2007.

Very hot story so far. Can't wait to read the other chapters.

It was a well thought scenario, but the personal emotions of the girls was not expressed to well. If you want to become a good writer, that grabs your readers and makes them ache for their own relief, put more emotions into the characters feelings. Let their bodies senses do the talking. If you have to, work together with a female writer and learn how and what turns them on and what they feel as they are experiencing these pleasures and pains.

My girl and I frigged and fucked each other stupid, give us more and more.

I was very lucky some years ago to fuck twin sisters for about two years till they found a guy with a ten inch cock

If I hear "damn girl" one more time I'm going to cut your dick off...lol

The only thing I can say about this story line is... who the dell is the father of which girl's kids??? there's semen flowing in each girl from all of the guys lol :P

Novel idea, but it missed so much. Quads who were somewhat outcasts would likely have satisfied their curiosities about the other sex with one another from the earliest days. Could they have withheld the desire to experiment til 18? Possibly, if they all agreed, conciously, but then where did they learn as much as they knew when the time came? Not a very likely story.

I loved it.....more of the Quads !

I ejoyed the story. It's rare for me to make it to the end of one, but I did finish this one. I will not be reading future parts to this story though. I read all of the other comments and I simply don't agree that you need to bring in mom and dad and the other things suggested. This wasn't a wham bam jackoff story, but I imagine that is what future parts would be if you try to please those for whom enough will never be enough.

Gina

I really enjoyed the read . I hope the other chapters are good as well..

Well written.

... with a couple of earlier comments. Firstly, if a girl's hymen is situated a couple of inches inside her vagina, she is seriously deformed and needs urgent medical attention. Secondly, yes - there is a strange lack of emotion in all of your characters. It's as if you can see them and therefore can describe their actions, but have never met them before, so you have no idea what they are thinking or feeling.

It creates a cut-out in the reader. If you don't know why they respond to a situation, why would you care?

Nice plot though.

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