All Comments on 'Quetzalcoatl Ch. 05'

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Anonymousabout 13 years ago

Delmarva

I bet there are not many readers that know where the DELMARVA area is !

I lived in Pocomoke City, MD from 1954 to 1958...

Thanks,

Tom Hyers

Oregon

Anonymousabout 13 years ago

Well Done

It is nice to read this series, a lot of thought went into the detail. Hope there is more to come.

Ghostwriter48

Eric_Shift about 13 years ago

Really loving the way you write.

Such detail. I'm really enjoying it.

Anonymousabout 13 years ago

nice going

nice going of this new adam and eve. but story is short. the anal love between them are too attracted. give them space for sex to made the mother conceive.

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