by RejectReality
Loved it. Made me very horny. Your writing is excellent, a relief from so much that is mediocre on here. Thank you, please write more. I especially enjoy erotica centred on highly sexed older women.
Loved the pace and build of the story! Since you asked the only thing I saw was that the vodka in the glass mysteriously became tequila in the glass 😉.
Having read most of your stories, so far, (I go chronologically) the setups are always intriguing. The actual sex tends to be very similar, almost templated. I find I'm now glossing over much of the sex. It still works, however.
One continuity error - vodka does not magically become tequila when added to OJ. (grin).
Thanks for your efforts.
BluJ
Your character development is magnificent.
Short, sweet, as vivid as your sex.
They SHINE!!!
This could take a second chapter!!!