All Comments on 'Quickie On The Road'

Your choice of language and the narrative style worked well. I enjoyed it very much.

Any story that uses the term "slimy man-milk" sucks!!!!!!!!

Not a bad read; the description of the power couple was spot-on, the pacing was good, the action lively. However, the word "brittle" was used too many times, and it's TAUT when you're describing asses or something else that's taut, NOT taught! If I had a dollar for every time I've seen this particular error I could retire.

Enjoyed your story. Since I am a traveling salesmen and spend quite a bit of time on the road and in airports I could easily relate to the benefits of people watching.

No comments for thirteen years, but there isn't much new to say about a run of the mill whore and cuck story. Especially one this bad.