All Comments on 'Quiet Please Ch. 01'

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HlovestoreadHlovestoreadabout 10 years ago
Keep going

Nicely written. This is a very good start to hopefully a long story. Good job!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Great Story

I agree, great story so far. Kept my interest without information overload. Can't wait to read more.

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