All Comments on 'Quiet Servitude Pt. 06a2'

by AmandaMI

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
revenge a dish served best cold

I'm looking forward to ammanda meeting christine. i hope christine gets her just deserts also.

I have enjoyed this story from the beginning and am looking forward to its continuation.

Jaqui LynneJaqui Lynneover 18 years ago
OK Story...writing needs help

Although your writing style is much easier to read than a lot of the stories posted, (some people just can't put a sentence together or the idea of punctuation is completely lost on them), you would do better if you proof-read the thing. It seems every third or fourth line I had to dicipher what you meant to write...not what you actually wrote.

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