All Comments on 'Quinn and Grey Ch. 02'

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canndcanndover 13 years ago

Again, this was tough because we were thrown in... obviously it was after the interlude in ch.1 but it sounds like they were together a while before they split leading to this five mos. apart..that's how I read it. Either way, I like the whole issue with him having replaced her to get her to say/prove she wanted him. The thing that didn't fit was her being the one to go to him when he realized he'd messed stuff up and say 'we'll fix this'...she was this emotionally stunted person in ch.1. She was so closed off and unable to recognize and deal with her own emotions let alone meet his head on and then reach out to bridge the gap. It was too drastic a change in her...making it almost seem like two different people.

Other than that, I still like the characters and the sex scene was hot. I'd still like to see more of them and this world they are in. Just hopefully, more continuity in the timeline and personalities.

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