All Comments on 'Quite A Nice End To The Evening'

Nice to see an adventurous loving couple trying new things. They are obviously in love with each other and willing to experiment a little. I can't wait to see part two.

I like a story of a married couple exploring each other sexually. This one is fairly well written. One suggestion, please make each part of a conversation seperate. Her saying something, his response, her retort, etc. In a couple of places you made them all one paragraph, so it can be hard to figure who is saying what. The reader actually stops reading to figure out who is talking, it is distracting and reduces the impact of that part of the story.