All Comments on 'Raining On Sunday'

by MugsyB

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Sidney43Sidney43over 12 years ago
Just lovely

Two people in love and they don't let a little rain ruin the day.

GimletEdgeGimletEdgeover 12 years ago
Lovely intimacy.

It illuminates their love-making.

Just the thing to drive away the rainy day blues.

PennLadyPennLadyover 12 years ago
Very sweet

A nice, laid-back story with some love. Sometimes that's all you need. Good job. :)

estragonestragonover 12 years ago
Why MugsyB is Premier League

This sweet, hot, believable story, with likable characters who have normal anatomy, is why MugsyB is at the top table in the Premier League. Really good writing, only one "laid" for "lay". Good stuff! More!

donaldedonaldeover 12 years ago
excellent short story

what a great little tale was most enjoyable

annanovaannanovaover 12 years ago
marvelous

I really can't think of a better way to spend a rainy Sunday.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
awwww

thats a sweetie cutie story

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Makes Me Think of You----and Us

Emily, this "rainy Sunday" made me think of you----and of us. Read it and dream. C

F_WhateverF_Whateverabout 12 years ago
OMG!

All day in bed? Really? Who could tell MugsyB had a naughty side????

Just kidding, of course. This is just lovely. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Sweet sweet sweet

really.... cannot however vote for this neither your other 2012 submission!

Curious7488Curious7488over 8 years ago
Great story

I lived your story about Christian and Maggie. Every thing flowed brilliantly. My only question is why it wasn't a series like your others? Keep up the great work!

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