All Comments on 'Rainy Day Girl'

very nice story keep writing

you wast your time by writting long story.do in short

nice story, liked it. keep up the good work!

Reminds me of my first a bit, in that mine included a BJ as well. She did not want me inside of her since she was an incest survivor and thought that I might remind her of Daddy too much. 'Q'uelle bummer,' as the French say. You have a lot of literate talent. Keep it up. I think that you know what I mean by 'it,' too. Good job. Worth a re-read I believe! Woulda given U six but the scale only goes up 2 five.

Nice story, brings back memories..... I'm remined of an old addage, (related to your critic, "Those that can, do, those that can't, critize......

Keep Writing

I liked your start, but please continue your story. It has a promise of being a good one!

I really liked it. It reminded me of young love. A great first time exploration. ;-)