All Comments on 'Ransom Ch. 02'
by AmandaSarah
- 14 Comments
Anonymousover 9 years agoSo that Jakob is a pansy isn't he! He acts all nice to her but as soon as the big bad comes in he acts like a whipped dog!!!
Parisiandelightover 9 years agoWell, i sure like this story. It is well written, and i like the suspense. But already at the end of chapter 2 and still no sex? Hey, but you are on literotica her ;)
Carole_n_Niceover 9 years agoI'm ok with getting this into slow development. As I said in chpt 1, this is a difficult subject to make credible and most authors just somehow that a strong woman, (or any woman), is just going to cower in fear. So the bridge from non erotic to erotica? It is the key and it needs to be taken slow, with credibility and a focused plot. LET US SEE THE NEXT CHAPTER AND.... it will be decision time. It is well written and a difficult progression. It takes courage, girl! Write on!
Anonymousover 9 years agoI love the progression in the first 2 chapters, in my opinion too many stories focus solely on the erotica and i'm loving how you are taking the time to create a credible story line and build the erotic tension. I can't wait to read where this is going to, please don't keep us waiting for too long!
Anonymousover 9 years agoNice and all I guess but what about "Just One Game"? Rather see that story progress than this one.
AmandaSarahover 9 years agoAuthorHi readers! Thanks to everyone who has sent me feedback. I do apologise for the lack of sex in the series so far; I know it's a little cruel but I have wanted to develop the story slowly. I promise the next chapter will have some action!
As for my other story, "Just One Game" - this was my first upload and somewhat of an experiment, but since receiving so many comments encouraging it's continuation I guess I have no choice but to write more! I'm focusing on Chapter 3 of "Ransom" at the moment but I'm on holidays so writing is at the top of my list ;)
IsabellaRoggiover 9 years agoLove your latest comment that you are working on both stories full speed ahead! Added to my favorites and looking forward to future stories from you!
Anonymousover 9 years agocame randomly across this story today and I have to say I really love it and cannot wait to read the next chapter :)
~ mel
IsabellaRoggiover 9 years ago...to have something wicked happen between Nathan and Mira? ;)
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