All Comments on 'Ransom Demand'

MMMMmmmmmmm..... My pussy is throbbing, dripping and hot from this story, and I didn't even touch myself -- yet! Now I've got to take a shower..... mmmmmmm....

Loved it!

I absolutely loved this!

omg, that was amazing. just what i was looking for... good girl on girl non-consent. keep it cuming...

Need MORE of this -

Took a while to get there but the pussy to pussy girl to girl was outstanding. I'll have to read more of your submissions

I've rarely read a better story of reluctant lesbian sex. The tension is excellent, and the detail is great. Very well done.

Totally straight here but I loved this story I very nearly came.

So I could get to the end! Fantastic detail. Thank you!

Absolutely delicious. mmmmmmmmmm....my own pussy is very hot right now. Thank you for sharing.

I would just like to comment, for better realism, that soap on a vagina is not pleasant. I know, it sounds hot, but in reality it burns and is generally uncomfortable. Other than that, I enjoyed your story. Just thought that one bit of info might help?

I LOVED this story. So incredibly hot. Would love to ask though, that you write a prequel to this, explaining how she was kidnapped, and how the men abused her body. That can be equally hot, especially if they force her to cum. I loved the build up with this story, but background into it would be great.