All Comments on 'Ratter Ch. 05'

the story so far is VERY EXCITING

i cant wait until the next chapter >_<

so ryans evil? agghhh the suspense is killing me

hope the next xhapters coming soon ;D

WOW. I was never expecting that at all! .. Damn it. I knew something was wrong with that Ryan person. I should next time trust my instincts! lol..

Shit. I do hope that they will be able to get to April in time. Please hurry. And write another chapter... and PLEASEEE can April and Seere get 'closer' to one another.. PLEASE!!! lol :D Yea you can tell im cheering them two on! lol

WOW. I was never expecting that at all! .. Damn it. I knew something was wrong with that Ryan person. I should next time trust my instincts! lol..

Shit. I do hope that they will be able to get to April in time. Please hurry. And write another chapter... and PLEASEEE can April and Seere get 'closer' to one another.. PLEASE!!! lol :D Yea you can tell im cheering them two on! lol

but I never expected him to be the big man. I thought he was just some guy who drew the short straw and had to watch her. Yikes! Go Seere, protect your woman!

Hey! You cant stop there! i was getting cuddled up in blankets with a glass of wine, loving how your posts are usually long and then... *sulks and glares*

Love your stories too much to stop now ;)

I'm supposed to be revising--but when I finally spotted you'd posted another chapter, I couldn't resist reading it.

I'm so glad I did. :) Wow! Can't wait to find out what happens next!

April's doppelganger actually seems more like a friend and not a scary half-vampire (telling April to powder her nose before her date and being good to watch TV). Also, Seere's cute when he's jealous, haha. It's fun hearing April's thoughts with Seere and on the date. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Please tell me that chapter 6 is on the way!!!!! I'm trying to be patient but I just can't stand it! Update sooooooon!!!!

loved the story but when is there going to be an update i'm actually dying from anticipataion here....well hopefully it'll be on the way soon!