All Comments on 'Raven & Cherry Ch. 1'

Hey you need more chapters!!!!!! This is one of the best stories I've read, and beleive me I have read thousands! Cherry has got to get her spot in the room with her beloved Raven! THey need to finally confess their love to each other and be together forever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Believable characters, great plot and great story you are really a great author. Although 3 years have passed I still think that we deserve at least one more chapter since you have left us 'up in the air'! How about it?

All the best, Pete.

Best story i ever heard but seriously....WRITE MORE CHAPTERS... im aching to find out if she gets the room with her love raven or not anyway, ya great story, your a great authour

TYPICAL ASSHOLE WRITER THAT CAN ONLY START A STORY BUT DOESN'T HAVE THE BRAINS TO FINISH YOU WOULD THINK THE PEOPLE IN CHARGE OF THE SITE WOULD REMOVE UNFINISHED STORIES AFTER SIX MONTHS OR SO AND NOT LET THE WRITER POST ANY MORE STORIES AFTERWARDS

this needs to be finished now since raven is so upset that it seems to me she would talk to a friend and then ask her parents if she can move in with a friend or into a friends motor home beause she doesn't want to be around someone that doesn't love her enough to help in her initiation the brother an sister need to be punished for what they did to raven

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