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"Fuck...I hate you...Zack...." She cried between her heavy breaths. "Taking advantage..uhh... of your senior."
"Shut up!" Zack groaned as he left her nipple. "You're the one...uh... who should be...ashamed...fucking a 26 six years old...intern...."
Mike was struck by a sword. He's just one year older than me? Lucky Asshole.
"God....I'm close....fuck me hard......" Sheryl cried out.
Zack was now driving his cock harder than before. Only after a couple of such deep strokes, Sheryl started cumming. Zack knew he couldn't hold himself much longer. And with a few more thrusts, he shot his load inside the condom in her pussy.
Watching them have their orgasms was too much for Mike. He knew he would shoot his load anytime so he quickly pulled up his boxers to avoid any mess. But he continued to stroke his dick through his boxers and shoot a stream of cum.
He saw that Zack had already pulled his dick out of her pussy so he knew it was time to move away. He quietly upstairs and went back to his room. It was 03:10 am when Mike came back to his room. Kate was still sleeping. For the next couple of hours, the images of the episode flashed across his mind.
He finally decided that it was time to RE-DEFINE the relationship.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 14 years ago*Fine story and this could be 3 or 4 Ch* long* and be a *3* and *100* all the way.!* Really enjoyed the way this was laid out and makes room for more surprises as you go for the works.!* *Guy with the *keyboard issue is just mad that his is worn out.!* *Mine is not though.!**** *Works great.!** See.******************** *Don't be mad at him though** because he is jealous he can't write a story like this.!***
Anonymousover 14 years agoThere are certainly far worse submissions than this. There are two specific criticisms I'll level at this: 1) the conversations are generally stilted and don't flow naturally; and 2) there's almost no tension whatsoever. I realize you're setting the stage, and that's fine, but the mother and son really need some tension between them. That should help make the story more immersive. Also, try reading the dialogue aloud.
Anonymousover 14 years agoCould be a long running series as he gets mom and then brings in wife. The form an exclusive triad and live togather for a long and happy life wife mom sleeping on his one side and wifey sleeping on his other. It could have been longer but hopefully you'll get there with additional chapters.
