by TalyisBagley
How many of us don't wish for our favorite fantasies to come true? Anyone that says they don't is lying!! (lol) I have a couple in here that I have read that drove me completely insane but I don't dare - not even here - say which two. Besides vampires and werewolves don't really exist anyway. But a girl can dream right? (LOL) Well done Taylis!
I loved these stories especially Peggy n Ray's.Great imagination.Keep it up.
Taylis,
As always.. I enjoy reading your stories and can not wait until you publish a book of that includes some of your works that you have been submitting to Literotica.
Thanks, Anxiously awaiting in NYC!
Loved it. At the begining with Peggy I completely related with how frustrated she was. You portrayed the reactions of the characters to the different scenarios very well. Have to read more of your work now!
:D Happy Halloween!
what the fuck this was a strange story the part about jason/kelis and macon/winslow had nothing to due with the story and just confused the reader it also pulled the reader out of the spell you were trying to weave and the readers have the nerve to praise this garbage it just goes to show what low class readers this site has
To the wtf poster.. you're not the sharpest pencil in the box are you. Perhaps one story had nothing to do with the other two stories because this is a collection of short stories. Well done Sherlock. You even said it yourself but were too slow to comprehend what you read.
I suggest you stay away from Stephen King's "Night Shift" book. It might keep you confused for years.
That the only link they have with Peg is that she is an online author and her stories are coming true for her and two of her readers. So of course they don't "know" her or interact with her on any other level.
Please proof read and find an editor. You had a good idea but it came out a mess.
Good writing but....... had to keep changing thoughts on which story i was reading.
Step brother n sister is not incest, its not illegal anywhere in the world either !
Try stay with one story, also try to do more descriptive work on your charachters too, gives us an idea who is who !
Good effort but only 2*