All Comments on 'Real Estate Agent'

Many words are incorrect......and confusing

missing the situatiion creation for pleasure, should detail the fore play.

A well written short story. Nice and quick but with heaps of details

Well done

There's heat, Annette has personality. Perfectly fine story. Make it a branch out period in the man's life.

This story sounds extremely familiar, and not in that after-a-while-all-the-stories-on-Lit-sound-the-same way. If this is a story which was submitted earlier, then revised and resubmitted, it would be nice to acknowledge that.