All Comments on 'Really Should Have Left it Online'

by Bianca_Sommerland

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PrincessErinPrincessErinover 14 years ago
Creepy

Such a weird but well written story. Thank you for sharing.

Magus_RoninMagus_Roninover 14 years ago
Nice

Nice story. A succubus as a vigilante, I honestly don't think I've actually encountered that theme before, vampire vigilantes sure, but I think this is the first time I've actually come across a story where a succubus is taking out bad guys, nicely done.

michchick98michchick98over 14 years ago
Damn!

Found your link through the AH threads. This is a perfect story for Halloween. Good luck in the contest.

Freefall_mcFreefall_mcover 14 years ago
Rawr!

LOL You sure cranked this out in a moment of heat! Very entertaining, in the spirit of a writer, knowing how to capture the attention of a particular audience. I'll reside to your corner anytime, hon!

DG HearDG Hearover 14 years ago
More Names

Hi Bianca, If Axel runs out of names (victims) for you let me know. There are a number of people I belive could use your services. LOL

Good luck in the contest. The fun is in writing the story and sit back and see what happens.

DG

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