All Comments on 'Rebecca Ch. 01'

just for a couple spelling dings and the very abrupt ending. Yolk/yoke, etc.

I thought the story was very interesting, your imagination is amazing the way you writeis intriguing, yes there was some spelling errors but i really dont care about that and dont get why others do, thanks for the story!

actually that was really BAD, i'm just not sure how to describe how REALLY BAD

C'est la vie

I dont know about most of the comments but im happy to see a story about my people, ( the germans, I am a Miller, Muller in german) at least making amends wih the Jews. because we started the war in the first place. I love this story and i hope you make more. I am intrested in finding out if she is with child.

but its hilarious how awesome a character rebecca is, holy shit she's full to bursting with personality, making me feel her fear, her hope, her isolation, her humor. The quick descriptions of the stories though... are problematic.

thanks fir the good story it dark but actualy with a sweet undertone