All Comments on 'Reborn'

For a first story, you've done quite well. A good story line and progression with little editing needed--I hope to see more of this and other stories in your mind in the years to come.

wonderful story, excellent writing!! i love this story!! more please!!

Great story please keep writing!!!

Great begining. It made me want more... Keep up the good work, please!

I would love to see more :)

cant wait to see where this is going, keep up the good work

I want more please...