by pointless
If I do say so. You did a nice job (so did I lol). You write well and though I love reading your poems best (just my fetish), it's great to see you writing again. :-)
Keep up the good work,found your story using the spinner,glad I did,going to check your other stories asap
I love a story with character development and wonderful lovemaking. You wove the threads of Kaylee's past, her thoughts and her present reality into a lovely tapestry. While it was initially annoying that she kept staying with the slob, she became easy to have empathy for, to fear for and to hope for. The lovemaking was wonderful. Thanks for sharing this story.
Why oh why do we have to have stories with fucking drugs in them?.Nothing irritates me more than trying to read a story that starts off well then descends into pot head paradise.Bloody annoying.The sex was ok but I left the story at page 2 because of the constant drugs references.Most off putting.