All Comments on 'Reclaiming a Life'

It does bring a nice closure. They both need the romance to complete what had been (in very different ways) hard lives!

Nice story.

everynight, i scan the new stories looking for those little or big gems. tonight, i found a jewel. keep up the good work, a fan always.

Very creative alternate endings. It is clear the work you and amber put into this. I think both are wonderful

Excellent job WD! Keep up the great work.

There are a few typos in your work, but otherwise, it is a very good story. For instance, one place you used "riff raft" when you meant "riff-raff"

Could you proofread and then have someone edit your work to correct this.

Both Your and Amber's ending is very good.

Both have excellent ideas, good writing and a few tiny faults, thank god, You two aren't perfect :-)

Keep at it please, both of you!

Thanks

John

Liked both sequels for their empathy, plausibility and altruistic plotline. Couldn't separate them on that score.

I've really liked all your offerings, Writingdragon, and this one shows a change in style for you, and as such a growth in your story telling. Very well done too, and thank you.

BTW Would you mind considering writing a sequel for 'Vanessa my love' by Wetworks_88? It's your type of plotline, I reckon. Seems to have burnt in the oven that one.

Cheers

Now I will read the first stories.

I actually like yours better - it closes the back story better - it also allows for a true rebirth for both of them - nicely done

I prefer yours....I'm a sucker for hope

Very well written, just more of a vignette than a story.

Proof that money isn't the end all be all I'd rather be broke and have my pride than be rich and classless like that clan of shores with K in the name

Please go to your nearest primary school and ask one of the kids to explain about the double letter rule.(With the parents permission of course).

It is shining not shinning.

It is staring not starring.

You go to a diner for dinner.

I have read most of your stories and have enjoyed them but you keep making this same simple error.

I'm glad you got them together.

I was afraid that 'Marshall' was going to put out a hit on JT.

Let JT keep practicing, and practicing and practicing ... LOL

O. K. the errors are grossly outweighed by the quality of the writing. Totally enjoyable even with the mistakes. It would be nice if you had a qualified editor though.I haven’t yet seen a story of yours that I didn’t really like.

Bill S.

I liked this second part better than the original. It felt complete. Both are well written this one just feels more rounded. BardnotBard