by jennygrrl
I think that was VERY well written...i can picture it happening as you wrote. you stayed true to character...which doesn't often happen in celebrity stories. While reading it, I could imagine Grissom behaving like that and the whole scene actually taking place. Well written.
I could actually see it happening. We all know they want it. Thank you for putting it into words.
I;ve read it before and I always come back to it-- if only if only it weren't on a network. . . .
THAT was awesome. Sooo true to character. I could literally see Grissom an Sara. You truly brought it to life. EXCELLENT JOB!
That rocked!! Being a big fan of William Paterson, I could see every detail. This would send the rating through the roof (if it was able to be shown). It would fit in so perfectly to the story. You rock! Keep up the good work.
I love how tender they are. Its just how I would imagine them to act, tender and then with more passion.