by gymmyt
Scrag the Skanky bitch and rescue the sister! Also make Grams and Gramps answer for the damage they did. It may have worked out okay but it was still a shit thing to do to your own son and grandson! Good story! Well Done
I'm not even interested in the sex i just wanna know what happens next!!!! Oh hell no. That bitch gotta pay! Lol.
Great story!! Please hurry up with the next chapters, I really want to find out how the story evolves. I never thought I'd say this about a story on Literotica, but the sex is almost distracting to the tale!! Damn, I must be getting old!
Gotta say this is really good. Talk about things getting personal. Can't wait to see what happens next. I agree, the mother needs to get hers, sister needs to be rescued and grandparents need to be confonted. Just wonder how the father is going to handle all of this as well, especially after what happen to the son. Glad the mother didn't know the girlfriend was coming. That was a close on on that front.
I MOST OF THE TIME SEND OUT NICE REMARKS ABOUT CLIFFHANGERS, BUT AS YOU WERE NOT FAIR I WON'T FAIR BE EITHER. NOW FIRST OF ALL YOU DREW US IN WITH THE PITY SHIT, NICE TOUCH, AND YES IT WAS GOOD. NEXT YOU TURN A CORNER WITHOUT ANY WARNING WHAT SO EVER, GO COMPLETELY IN ANOTHER DIRECTION, THEN JUST AS WE ADVIT READERS THINK OK I SEE WHERE I THINK THIS IS WHERE HE IS GOING, COMES THIS BIG MYSTERY JIVE, PROMISING ANSWERS TO LONG ASKED, AND FORGOTTEN QUESTIONS. THEN THE POOR GUY MAKES NEW FRIENDS AND WE DAMN NEAR FORGET WHY HE IS EVEN THERE IN THE FIRST PLACE. THEN TO THE SURPRISE EVERYONE READING THE STORY YOU BLINDSIDE US. TO THAT I SAY TOUCH'E THAT IS A SICK BITCH IF NOTHING ELSE AND SHE NEEDS DEALING WITH, AND NOT WITH CASH. THE BITCH BETTER GET WHAT SHE DESERVES 10 FOLD. AS GOOD AS THIS STORY TURN OUT YOU HAD THE NERVE TO TO LEAVE US AT A GREAT BIG JUICY CLIFFHANGER. WITH ENOUGH SUBPLOTS TO CLEANUP! OFF TO A GREAT START, BUT AS MANY HAVE TOLD YOU GET THE FUCK BUSY ON THE NEXT PART, AS WITH ALL THESE PEOPLE HANGING ON THE THE ROPE IS UNRAVELING, AND WE WANT TO BE NEAR THE GROUND IN CASE IT BREAKS. BEST CLIFFHANGER I HAVE READ. BE NICE ON THE NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE. I HOPE THE SISTER IS SPARED, AS SHE IS ANOTHER PAWN. BUT WILL ANYONE SEE THIS AS THE MOTHER IS SO BAD WILL LOGAN OR HIS PEOPLE SEE THAT WHEN THE REVENGE COMES. STAY TUNED READERS FOR THIS BURNING QUESTIONS AND ANWERS SAME BAT TIME SAME BAT CHANNEL!!!!!!
I don't think I have ever seen a story on here get straight 100's from everyone!!!
ANd listen!!!!!1The next chapter has to come soon!! I would hate to have to go back and re-read this story again just to catch back up!! And Damn, I was hoping that Mom would but sis on that big cock for an added touch!! But let's give Mom what she deserves!!!
The sex was just ok....but the story...that's fun!
Can't wait to see what happens!
One of the best stories posted. Are we going to see Chpt 2??
there is no problem all he has to do is go to the police and tell them what happened and get a blood test fo the drug then sue her for drugging them and for rape
I hope that you continue to write this story. It could go in so many directions with many options for vengeance or forgiveness.
Almost impossible to offer any kind of comment on the beginning of what might be a story.
you need to finish this off so people know where you were going with it. don't leave people hanging