All Comments on 'Recovery of a Hero Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
grammar check

Really need a good editor/proofreader/grammar checker.

i.e. "your vs. you're". Makes a big difference in understanding the dialog.

You're a good story teller but a little improvement in writing would help.

Thanks,

de Jay

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
This

really is a good series,and ranks along with the best ones on this site.

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