by Roadbug
This chapter wasn't necessary. Why repeat the same story over and over again? God story, but don't overdo it. G.Belgium.
you started out with a pretty good story line, but it has begun to become boring...nothing new, just more ways of telling the same story...please move on, or let it die here...
RoadBug I`m a Navy Brat myself i think your doing a great job my dad had gotten us IDs when we were kids but i had to surrender mine when i turned 18 because of my earnings but you keep up the great writing you hear.:)
I like it very much. I hope you follow through with why there was oil on the diving board.