All Comments on 'Recovery of a Hero Ch. 10'

by Roadbug

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
the same

This chapter wasn't necessary. Why repeat the same story over and over again? God story, but don't overdo it. G.Belgium.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
TOO MUCH REPITITION

you started out with a pretty good story line, but it has begun to become boring...nothing new, just more ways of telling the same story...please move on, or let it die here...

bornagainbornagainover 15 years ago
Another fine chapter

RoadBug I`m a Navy Brat myself i think your doing a great job my dad had gotten us IDs when we were kids but i had to surrender mine when i turned 18 because of my earnings but you keep up the great writing you hear.:)

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I like it very much. I hope you follow through with why there was oil on the diving board.

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